![]() ![]() Kinda undermines efforts for more inclusive language when you use them in ways that deliberately makes them sound silly. Look, I get what you're going for, but there is no getting around that the arrangement here sounds like you're saying Cayde-6 is a metal woman. Intro by personal favorite writer of mine, Jonathan To: "Exos, like Cayde-6, are metal women and men." I wasn't even reading closely since I've read most of these entries before now, but here are the most egregious ones I spotted: I previously bitched about all the things that were off in the cookbook, and I know that errors in copy are basically essential to the Destiny experience at this point, but come on. You get three stars because I am BEGGING an editor or proof reader to look more closely at these books that Bungie keeps releasing. "The Man They Call Cayde" is the strongest bit in this one, but imo it's one of the best-written lorebooks in the game. So, as usual, amazing art and a well-curated collection.
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